One day I woke up and I saw a humongous volcano out my window It grew bigger and bigger by the minute it grew bigger and it shot out so much smoke all I could see was black mist then I saw people in there car moving to another town was it gonna blow na I thought to myself I went down stairs and I couldn't find mum and dad and my little brother I thought it was a surprise but my birthdays not for ages they probably went shopping but the super markets aren't open yet something was going on thats when a looked out the kitchen window a saw lava out of the volcano then it started coming to the house then I ran outside I had nowhere to go the lava was blocking me from every Direction so I went in the house and I went to the roof and I grab some flares and there was a helicopter flying around so I lit the flares and that was I was on the helicopter my dream the end
Hi Kaleb, Thanks for sharing your dream. I like how you described the volcano with black mist and lava. Think about using full stops to separate your sentences and use a capital letter to show the beginning of a new sentence.
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