Kia ora Kaleb, what a fantastic week of mahi. You should be super proud of how much you have achieved. You have done well to explain why brushing elephants teeth is important because of all the different kai they eat. You are right, all the fruit could cause some decay and eventually rot their teeth. The design you came up with for a new toothbrush looks very well thought out. The wide slats would work well to scrap the plaque off. Nice work creating a box out of card, which is sustainable and easy to access. Thinking about the fact that animals might not want to eat it was a good idea. You worked hard to get this done and it was awesome to see you using actual materials to make a model. All the maths practise you have been doing is giving you a great push forward, you are sharing your working out which helps all of us learn other ways to solve problems. Thank you Kaleb for an amazing week.
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Kia ora Kaleb, what a fantastic week of mahi. You should be super proud of how much you have achieved. You have done well to explain why brushing elephants teeth is important because of all the different kai they eat. You are right, all the fruit could cause some decay and eventually rot their teeth. The design you came up with for a new toothbrush looks very well thought out. The wide slats would work well to scrap the plaque off. Nice work creating a box out of card, which is sustainable and easy to access. Thinking about the fact that animals might not want to eat it was a good idea. You worked hard to get this done and it was awesome to see you using actual materials to make a model. All the maths practise you have been doing is giving you a great push forward, you are sharing your working out which helps all of us learn other ways to solve problems. Thank you Kaleb for an amazing week.
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