Kia ora Kaleb! Wow what an epic amount of writing, you have been busy. You have set out your writing into paragraphs which shows you are learning how to link your ideas and separate them when needed. You used the expression "nuked them with questions" which was a great way of setting the scene, I could imagine how your parents were bombarded with questions! Excellent effort Kaleb, you should be really proud of this mahi. Great to see you this week at our Meets, keep it up!
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Kia ora Kaleb! Wow what an epic amount of writing, you have been busy. You have set out your writing into paragraphs which shows you are learning how to link your ideas and separate them when needed. You used the expression "nuked them with questions" which was a great way of setting the scene, I could imagine how your parents were bombarded with questions! Excellent effort Kaleb, you should be really proud of this mahi. Great to see you this week at our Meets, keep it up!
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